Dathomir WIP feedback

Hey guys, I’m working on a landscape for my friends Star Wars short film set on Dathomir.

I’m getting to a stage now where I’m pretty happy with it, I’d still like to add some finer details though. Thought I would ask you guys to give it a look, incase i missed something or you have any suggestions on what details could be added.

Thanks :)


Her’s a quick test I did in Unreal Engine, I will still make some standalone mountains to populate the more distant background with

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Hello and welcome!

Looking at it, I feel that some sediments (such as low scale Thermal2) would add to it, feeling corners and small crevices. You know, some sand here and there, shoved to cavities by the wind. =)

Cool shapes!

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Very fun! I browsed some reference art, and I’d make the terracing sharper and a bit larger like the cliff on the top right.
The jagged ridge on the top left is particularly nice and accurate to a lot of refs.
I’d try adding that shape around more, both taller and and at smaller scales. I’m seeing lots of very sharp rock spires.

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Thanks for the advice, I ws going to sculpt some spires but its a good Idea to use that ridge again aswell